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大学英语四级作文评分原则、标准及各分数档样卷(建议收藏)

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四六级考试将近,第一次参加考试的你,一定要知道官方的四六级作文评分原则+标准+各分数档样卷,这样就对自己的水平以及要努力达到的分数档有数啦~ 

一、四六级作文评分原则

1. CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求,对作文的评判应以此为准则。

2. CET作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。

3. 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。

作文应表达题目所规定的内容,而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题,是否充分表达思想,也要考虑是否用英语清楚而和合适地表达思想,也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。

4. 避免趋中倾向。

该给高分给高分,包括满分;该给低分给低分,包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。

5. 所发样卷一律不得翻印,严禁出版,一经发现,必予追究。 

二、四六级作文评分标准

1. 本题满分为15分

2. 阅卷标准共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。

3. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照样卷评分,若认为所阅文章与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分);若认为所阅文章稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。

4. 评分标准

2分——条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。

5分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

8分——基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。

11分——切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。

14分——切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺、连贯,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。

[注:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。]

5. 字数不足应酌情扣分:

[注:1. 如题目中给出主题句,起始句,结束句,均不得计入所写字数。

2. 规定的内容未写全者,按比例扣分。

3. 如要判为0分,需慎重处理。]

6. 为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准,现将各档作文分相当于百分制的得分,列表如下,称为得分率。其中9分的得分率为60分(相当于百分制的60分)。

三、四级作文评分样卷

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below.You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the kid's understanding of going to school.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1.

14 points 

As is demonstrated in the picture, despite his mother’s angry face, the kid is unwilling to go to school, arguing that since he can get everything he wants to know through his phone, there’s no nned going to school and acquiring them in class. It’s no uncommon to hear such argument among young students nowadays. 

However, this kid’s understanding of going to school can be potentially harmful for following reasons. First, more than merely acquiring knowledge, going to school is also an act to get involved in society. We’ll learn how to build friendship and develop interpersonal skills, which is valuable experience in our life that cannot be learnt from phones. Besides, schools also teaches us how to think, how to pursue knowledge actively, which can not be replaced by cellphones because we can only gain knowledge passively from cellphones. 

For reasons above, it’s high time that young students realized the value of school. Put down their phones and interact with others, and a bigger world is waiting for us to explore.

11 points 

The picture describes a conversation between a child and his mother. The child thinks it is not necessary to attend school because almost all information can be obtained from cell phone with Internet. That seems make sense, whereas, in my perspective, it is still essential for us to go to school. 

We live in an information age when books and articles are avaible to everyone on the Internet. Knowledge becomes public. If we want to learn something such as mathematics, we can easily find some related books online. However, knowledge online isn’t knowledge. You will need to learn it and turn it to your own knowledge. Schools, or maybe teachers, can conduct you how to learn well. Actually, they develop your study habits and tell you some methods when dealing with new difficult problems. How to learn is absolutely more important than what to learn. Although there are huge amounts of knowledge online, we still need to know how to master it. That’s why we go to school. 

8 points 

The carton reveals a young boy who takes a phone and show his doubting, and a man with a dog is listening his question. “Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?” Nowaday, a great amount of students use electronics like mobile phone. It seems we can acknowledge all information through internet, but something we ignored.

First of all, if we have already got a phone and don’t need to go to school, so how about improve our communication skills? There is no platform for students to know each other. 

Secondly, how to create a team work? We only know ourselves, and don’t know sharing, don’t know help others, don’t know 1 + 1 more than 2. 

Last but not least, we can learn not only knowledge, but also music, computer, and language. 

All reasons show why we should go to school. Although it is convenient for us to acknoledge information through phone, but lost happiness of learning and exploring with others which is the most important. 

5 points

In our daily life, more and more morden method can start. Just like the picture said “why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?” As we knowns, we can start from our phones. But I think there is a misunderstanding said about this. The reasons are above of. 

Going to school, we can start all subjects, example, Chinese, Math, Music and so on. When we not understand, we can ask for teachers. We can receive all kinds of knowledge from the school. Going to school, we have communicate with teacher and classmate, these can help us improving our communicate skills, which can help we when we go to sociate. If you have this communicate relationship, we will have good job. 

In all, learning from the phone can not steady of learning from school. In our life, the phone knowledge is limit. In our limited education condition, going to school will learn more knowledge. It can take us all knowledge, communication skills, people’s relationship. 

2 points 

Why I going to school if my phone already knows everything? But you phone can’t teacher you how learning. 

For some reasons, in we are a child, we must going to school, to study, to leaning, to player. But if this IT time, this Bigdate time, my phone can knows everything. He ccan teacher you, can easy call everone, can giving you happying from something game. 

Because, the school can give more. First, let you going to school, is in government idea, in very long time is away in they. Two, you father and mother, he want to you going to school, because, in him we are child, in him we be going to school. So where you phone can already knows everthing. But this is just phone he can’t chang we are school. For something reason, school away is school, whever IT time, Bigdate time, school is nobody can easy chang. Because, this is school, by learn, by funing, giving you friend the school.

来源:全国大学生英语四六级考试官网 

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